Repayment Of A Rib Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Repayment Of A Rib

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Black holes exploited
universes came into being
galaxies colored the space
suns, planets and moons started dancing,
volcanoes erupted
the planet shown its puberty through the mountains
clouds were raised from the oceans
rains came with the songs of pleasure
earth was pregnant of greenery
flowers were bloomed
butterflies kissed the pollen grains
fruits scattered their seeds all over the soil
world became a forest
but the Eve is still repaying the compound interests of a rib,
while the principal is still standing as a rock!

Repayment Of A Rib
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 March 2018

A thought provoking poem intelligently penned. A stark reality on the effect of poverty. Loans are greedy achemes of businessmen that instead of helping the people to be freed from the claws of poverty, they are driving them into deeper holes. An insightful piece.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 March 2018

butterflies kissed the pollen grains fruits scattered their seeds all over the soil world became a forest.....fascinating expression! Very nicely penned....thanks for sharing....10

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Khalid Saifullah 08 March 2018

It's a great poem on this special day for women.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 March 2018

butterflies kissed the pollen grains fruits scattered their seeds all over the soil world became a forest but the Eve is still repaying the compound interests of a rib, while the principal is still standing as a rock! ......I find here a theme with happiness and sadness, the picture too touches the heart. Beautifully inscribed.

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