Remember Poem by jax col

Remember



Remember those times we laughed and played along the sandy beach
Remember those times we use to try catch the stars even those beyond our reach
Remember those times we danced all night until the break of dawn
Remember those times we whispered together sealing secrets sworn
Remember those times you under the pale moonlight you used to kiss me tenderly
Remember those times we strolled through life as if it were our own melody
Remember those times of silent speech when we spoke with only our eyes
Remember those times every morning and night having to say our sweet goodbyes
Remember those times we rolled around together upon the hills
Remember those times you used to pick me spring born daffodils
Remember my sweet the memories which range throughout the years
Because my love, now I am gone, remember my smile shed no tears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Archer 07 February 2008

nice use nof iambic pentamitor... good pace and nice imagery

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