Rejection And Pain Poem by Sandra Feldman

Rejection And Pain

Rating: 5.0


Like the flame
Of a lit candle,
Whose drip, drip,
Fades life away
Like the mountain
High to handle
Just Because its
Made that way,
Like the silent love,
No scandal,
That you dare not
Ever say,
That's what loving
You, is like,
Unattainable,
As love slowly dies
From inattention,
The same way.

Wednesday, February 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C F 14 February 2019

A heartfelt poem of rejection in beautiful verse.... how can one ever atone for causing such pain...

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Brian Markey 13 February 2019

A very deep write about unreciprocated love, though it hurts moving on is the key, aim to do better, it does work.

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M Asim Nehal 13 February 2019

Nice poem on betrayal of love. I quote: Like the silent love, No scandal, That you dare not Ever say,

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 February 2019

A lovely poem my friend! Touching expression! I would invite you to please visit my poem 'Pleasure of loneliness' and to have a precise review possibly with a vote!

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