Regret Poem by merna ibrahim

Regret

Rating: 1.5


This is a duet from'Merna Ibrahim & Reem Ehab'

Why we are not looking in the bright side of the person except when he is gone?
In my bewailing world, I feel grievous and alone.
We were born angels, but life made us devils.
In the guilt universe we hardly pass the torment levels.
Human nature which doesn't appreciate the value of the thing except when it is lost.
I think it is a devilish manner and its highly cost.
I wish cruel people had treated the victims well.
I think they are reprehensible and deserve hell.
We were created innocent and we didn't need a sneer.
When the simpleton manners didn't appear.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angelica Ayman 29 October 2009

another great and wonderful poem thx 4 charring voted 10++++++++++ angelica

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Afzal Shauq 26 May 2009

a good written piece with rich idea... wonderful... like it very much and you got 10/10

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Omar Ibrahim 28 January 2009

great poem by a great poet..but merna please dont put in mind bad things that happen...look to good sides of your life(a good young poet-a girl from a great country) you are so young and you have a long life to live...dont stuff your mind of fear and sadness..i read your poems and i realized that most of them are sad.dont do that dear.you are still small.please..................... omar ibrahim(cairo-EGYPT)

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Raouf Ayoub 09 January 2009

You need to work more on rhyme

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