Regret (3) Poem by Seamus O' Brian

Regret (3)

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my fingers trace the
cold emptiness of the bed
my words in your heart

Tuesday, February 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 22 February 2018

A clear picture, Neal, and a reminder of how things like the cold unoccupied sheet—inanimate by themselves—can hold such poignancy. -Glen

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Rini Shibu 20 February 2018

Loneliness is well penned Seamus

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Seamus O Brian 21 February 2018

Thank you, Rini. Sometimes mistakes lead to loneliness, and loneliness can teach us how to love better. :)

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Lyn Paul 20 February 2018

Words of love beautifully expressed with your loving words in that special place.

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Seamus O Brian 21 February 2018

Thanks for reading, Lyn! And for your kind words. Be blessed, my friend!

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Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

Galway, Ireland
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