Reflection Poem by rhona fabi

Reflection

Rating: 4.6


The girl I used to see
is painted with frowned face
as she looked at me.

I gotta look for the answer
why she used to greet me
with those eyes?

I wanna cheer her up
and fade the painted
sad face.

Then I smile to wake her up,
her floating mind in this time
and she finally smiled at last!
but before the moment,
she cried so fast.

I undeniably get worried
with her eyes
as she finally caught
my eyes sight.

I stopped to see her anxious eyes
for it says something.

She's hopeless, yet she still
believe in life.
She's withered, yet drowned
with tears.
She's tired, but she keeps
on surviving.
She's sad, she can't deny.
She's upset and can't stand.
She totally down
and I could feel it inside me.

But why?
I find myself talking
with my brain and I'm feeling'
nearly going crazy
when I found myself looking
in front of a life size
mirror of mine.

But I'm cheering someone,
someone I used
to talk to...

Yes to someone...
to a clear reflection
of mine.

Copyright © by Ronalyn 'Rhona' T. Fabi
(An original poem written on the 9th day of September 2005. I made this for myself in the midst of my problematic times.)

(This literary piece is govern with the rights of the author. Anyone who wants to use this poem should first ask the author or contact at reiyuucy_26@yahoo.com)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 14 September 2009

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Ted M 07 August 2009

Great piece, nice idea, interesting.............10+++

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Ency Bearis 03 August 2009

an awesome poem with good intention...very nice...10

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Scarlette Romero 29 July 2009

What a nicely written poem....Beautiful description....10++++

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