Reaction Poem by Sina Farajzadeh

Reaction

Rating: 5.0


I just loved her but she did it to me! (1)
I did nothing wrong but they did it to me! (2)
I tried to send positive feelings, some did it to me! (3)
I got depression, felt sad and sadness, and then,
I started to be calm, because I did it to her! (4)
I left them alone and showed my value to them, see... What I did to them!
I appreciated all dear friends and loved them more, so we did it together! (5)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Hints:
(1) : she ignored me and bled my heart!
(2) : they spoiled me and broke my heart!
(3) : some were sympathetic and gave me good feelings!
(4) : I tried to forget her and think more about myself and others!
(5) : we tried to show the others that we can do better and be the best.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nader Baheri 03 September 2012

i love points no.4 and no.5 I think it is the time that we must be a little bit selfish as they are. I want to say forget her for the better life.Although i know it is difficult. nice poem pal.

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