Rain! ! ^_^ ¡¡ Poem by Rajat Joshi

Rain! ! ^_^ ¡¡

Rating: 2.5


It was cold and quiet so windy,
Dim and dark with no sun around,
Black heavy clouds surrounding my head,
With ice chilling breeze freaking me out!

The weather was lovely,
Quite birds were chirping,
Pigeons lined up to have a bath,
The dogs stay away, hiding in a cot,
Squeezing so tightly, in and out.

Can't you guess! It was time of rain,
Seeing shuddering children with anxious eyes,
Down it desends, majestically in wonder,
And splashes here 'n' there so well.

Small kids play with paper boats,
The youths' romance boosted up at last!
The elders prefer to stay at home,
Eating ' breadpakodas ' with sauce,
Unable to use the park benches now,
Old people stare rain in troublesome thought! !

It's all for a while, it will go away,
Such a beauty, so all revered,
I love the rain and love the breeze,
Wishing it comes again 'n' again,
The way it come the way it comes,
Cherry 'n' elegant and cold as ever! ! <3 <3 <3

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i woke up late n was about to miss my school. i saw out of the window. the whole area was covered under water. then i just let go the thought of the school n was totally filled with feelings n thought of rain n the breeze hitting my face.. i just loved it. so there you are with a jolly poem by me.: -) <3<3<3.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fonia Tan 15 July 2012

Though it is written beautifully, it lacks the flow of a poem. I like the way you describe rain but when spoken it seems the flow is missing. =D

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