Rain Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
Rain
the sun and moon
the wind and rain
all this come to me
for a gain..and
it's my love..i refrain
even if i were in a drain
the sun will pick me up
with its scorch
the same scorch
which gives the moon
it's torch
the moon will float
that mild wind
that will unveil a silent bride...
the cloud
will pour out its love
by way of rain
Nice descriptive poem about the nature, wonderful metaphors well embedded to obtain a special poetical image.The poet's relationship with nature is very fine highlighted in those lines where the poem has an allegorical character. Lovely to read 10++++++++++
how lovely the rain, pouring out love in every field how lovely the rain if it pour just right to each craving ground quenching the terrain's thirst supplying man's requirements none flood to drain none calamity to mule over as rain sustain just right, just right to our needs and gains...... lovely poem Sam thanks for the inspiration that you have given me now to write this piece! ! !
Nice time for such a poem! Its our retreating monsoon with cold showers and a mild sun and a ghostly moon!
It is sad that, sun disappears, when it time for moon to come, Or moon disappears when sun arrives, When water comes near to fire, the fire disappeared.
' the sun and moon the wind and rain all this come to me for a gain..and it's my love..i refrain....' Thats beautiful write here A raining beauty indeed. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+
An easy and effotless flow that is as refreshing like rain.
the sun and moon the wind and rain all this come to me for a gain..and it's my love..i refrain wow... the meaning of this hits the very soul of the reader. very much well done. :) im a fan.. officially.
even if i were in a drain the sun will pick me up .................... Nice message. Nice flow of your words..And I love it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 4:19:18 AM # 1.0.0.1119
It rains delightfully with words you poured....great.....10