Promises Poem by Shay Mitchell

Promises

Rating: 5.0


the only thought that comes to mind
is the desire to see blind.
everything i see
shall always be with me.
stars are wat i believe
cuz they will never leave.
people all around
crawl by without a sound.
the promises they make
always turn out to be fake.
promises are meant to be trusted
but all they seem to be is busted.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ana Sanchez 10 September 2009

True Words..Always come from the heart..Very talented..I understand where u are coming from..10 my friend

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Danny H 10 September 2009

I understand each word, i cant ever hope for anything, believe any promises no matter who from, i cant trust noone because of this. Lovely poem! . Very talented i like how its more street: D

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