Primed Poem by Deluke Muwanigwa

Primed

Rating: 5.0


Look at that soldier
Dressed up in his war garb
Ready for war
Primed to kill

See the lion king
Canines sharp
A body of pure sinew
A perfect predator

I look at you my love
Created for love
Shapely and beautiful
Ready, i hope to God, for me and only me

Do you look at me?
Do you see me?
Tall, dark and handsome?
Primed for you?

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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Ready for love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deluke Muwanigwa 14 March 2021

Thank you both

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 13 March 2021

A fine romantic verse, beautifully imagined.

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Susan Williams 13 March 2021

interesting juxtapositions

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