Prettier Ones. Poem by Gangadharan nair Pulingat..

Prettier Ones.



Butterflies, we are seeking honey
The sweetness of honey always prefer
The beautiful flowers treats us well
The beauty of world, we enjoys
The little children runs behind us
To catch us alive and tie in threads
We know their naughty actions
Unknowingly they makes us to suffer
The little ones never we curse them
They just like us are really enjoying
Their own valued life in earth
They promised to plant more flowering plants
Without hurting we can drink the honey
The sweet honey for our little life.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The prettier ones, butteryfly.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liza Sudina 24 September 2015

Nice! except for grammar: don't put s in plural form of verbs (we enjoy, children run) .Lovely!

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