Poem #26 Poem by RIC BASTASA

Poem #26

Rating: 5.0


the painting that you
gave me
was nailed upon its
frame by the wall of
our old house in that
faded city of my ancestors

it shows a man without
clothes with his back facing
at me
he is thin and without hair
he cast a shadow on the
the floor where he stood
facing the blue sea

sometimes i stand there
in the middle of this old
ancestral house
without paint without scent.

sometimes i wonder what if
the man without hair, thin and
tall, faces me as i stand here
lonely in the middle of this
ancestral house where no one
wants to stay that long,

what if i have seen his eyes
as he stood on that pavement
of nails, what if i look for
long in his eyes, would i also
see the suffering of my
ancestors, the suffering of
this house, and all the
sufferings of those who
once lived here?

Thursday, August 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 16 August 2019

The painting that was given was really very fine. Wonderful poem you have brilliantly penned with nice narration...10

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