Please Know Poem by Sonya Annita Song

Please Know

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On days when tears keep falling
And lonely nights feel cold,
Please know that you were wanted
By fate and earth to hold.

You feel the world's against you;
No matter how you try,
You cannot find good reasons
To live and not to die.
Your heart and mind are shattered;
Your faith is torn in shreds;
Barbed anguish would ensnare you
And trap you in its threads.

On days when tears keep falling
And lonely nights feel cold,
Please know that you are wanted
By fate and earth to hold.

Wednesday, January 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: faith,hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C F 09 January 2019

Lovely poem, I admire your way choosing simple words to express complex sentiment. I also like the way you discipline yourself to make your poem flow smoothly on the tongue as the poem is read, very tough work to choose each proper word and requires a lot of patience!

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 January 2019

Your heart and mind are shattered; Your faith is torn in shreds; ......tears and lonely nights.......... a very fine poem full of emotions., tony

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