Please Don'T Cut Yourself... Poem by Luz Hanaii
Please Don'T Cut Yourself...
I know you cut yourself.
And deep inside my heart
Cries out for you.
I feel your pain
Your deep despair.
That short futile relief
Self mutilation brings,
Your tortured soul,
Oh! wasted blood,
Ungodly act,
This wrong belief.
Spirits that want to snare
and rip not only flesh
but soul instead.
Sinful lust for human blood.
They crave your death.
I pray at night His guiding light
will clear your mind, your way,
Heal your heart,
And free your soul from
such a wicked snare, at last.
as a cutter, i think if i read this poem again when i am down, i won't do it
What a radiant yet ensuring way to send your message to one disturbed soul through smooth soothing whispering poetic lines! Great piece Luz.10/10
Hi Kesav, so nice to see you again. Thank you so much for your comment. I hope you're doing well. Sending lots of good wishes.
I vote your beautiful poem 10/10.......Hope, you can understand my sentiment!
Hi Luz, I had no intention to trouble you! But I sincerely request you to be a good critic and try to offer constructive criticisms! Poem of just 4 lines might have fathomless beauty...interpret things in the right way! By the way this is a beautiful work of yours! Stay blessed!
Wow! This is your standard! You are certainly neither a good poet nor a good human being. You derive pleasure by inflicting pain on other! I must identify whose representative you are? Come on read my top poems. You are welcome
I don't think you have understood my little work in the right way!
" You are certainly neither a good poet nor a good human being" You're entitled to your opinion. I'm sorry you miss understood my poem. Good luck to you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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An insightful poem on self harm. A wonderfully written poem dear Luz.