Please Be Poem by Gabriel Owino Jr.

Please Be

Rating: 4.5


I need an audience,
one to pay attention to my insanity,
one to listen to my abnormality,
will thouest be the one?

I seek for a place in this Earth,
a place in one's heart,
that needs not renting,
a permanent hut it be,
will yours be the one?

Thinking of giving my fluid emotion,
a hollow, where to fill of my angel flow,
that i shall full to overflow,
will thouest be the one's

Monday, November 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 08 December 2015

Love is a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly. If it's a natural mutual affinity, definitely the subject of the poem is your companion in the voyage of pure bliss. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned from heart in good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Gabriel. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 30 November 2015

Love is a form of insanity. Thanks, Gabriel

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Shakil Ahmed 30 November 2015

beautiful expressions of love, a fine rhythmic poem, thanks for sharing

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