! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Pilgrims! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Pilgrims! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Eyes behold all around us
images of places and time delivered
across hours of light and dark in continuum
still life wades through mystery

time happens to happen
through matrices of dynamics
as when we meet together
heart shares sorrow and joy

at time we differ by reasons
even if rain conquers dusts of earth
storm by winds and rain
leaves rush to grey and dry

mist of green dehisces from meadow
we talk of story of yesterday wind
time we meet repeats history
don’t we talk same even as untold?

don’t we smile in same way
facts scratching from fossils
are we not the same primates
as long before as pilgrims

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 June 2010

‘don’t we talk same even as untold? ’ In exaltation …a sense of voidness nihilism nimbles…with yearning to fill up own bosom or vent out to fill others bosom We look for joy in emotional pilgrim [especially] to reach the covet ed acme …and you’ve carried us to that summit 10/10++++ [for pilgrim pleasure] Ms. Nivedita UK

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still life wades through mystery time happens to happen through matrices of dynamics as when we meet together heart shares sorrow and joy at time we differ by reasons even if rain conquers dusts of earth storm by winds and rain leaves rush to grey and dry a beautiful way of pondering..and we differ by reason..do really we own our self or the circumstances own us...in this moment are we able to take what we want..the rain can be as the soul which so pure which surpass any reason and any dusty minds and thoughts...your thoughts lead my thoughts to other thoughts...deep wondering about the life elements...a poem which take the mind to soar beyond the reason...10+++++

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Vaibhav Pandey 24 March 2009

a powerful poem sir...full of wisdom.....10

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Miriam Maia Padua 23 March 2009

very touching...esp to our soul a write with depth that it reaches to the core of our hearts... deep thoughts shared, expressed and revealed... thoughts are so beautiful...dancing in every lines you write... in every question you raised...truth is there.... in every path we take, in every we field we go...may we always be pilgrims... where we journey together...with our loveones, friends and esp...with God.. 10+++++ for this....

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Chitra - 15 March 2009

profound..revelaing the truth related to all of us...ulitmately we are all pilgrims in our own little way

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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