Penetrate Poem by Crimson Love

Penetrate

Rating: 5.0


Penetrate me...
but don't leave....
stay there,
Feel me within,
to leave me speechless outwardly,
Taste Divinity, savor all that is love,
Our hearts bear witness, to this wanted violation,
Sporatic Breaths, moan loves name,
Hearts beat in unison, together as one,
Stay within Crimson, This Violation of love shall remain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siyabonga A Nxumalo 15 November 2011

Yes, it is a great poem, like Jamal F said, , , it really have a sexual sense...beautiful though Crim.......

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A Lifetime Of Fame 14 November 2011

Very lovely poem. Brings out a lot of feeling. But the ne sense that I get most out of this (and call me perverted) is a sexual sense. Whether I'm right or wrong, it's a very good write.

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Dave Walker 14 November 2011

A great poem, i see a few meanings in this. A great write.

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