Peace Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Peace

Rating: 3.2


I see u walking in the clouds watching the children play,
You cry for the their sorrows, sorrows on their way,
Your thoughts so beautiful, wanting to protect them all,
But that is not how it is going to be resolved.

You, dear friend, write with all you heart,
Maybe one day it will tear the devil apart,
The Gods will rule and there will be peace,
With your words ruling, the legacy of war will cease.

(For my dear friend Randy Hogan on PH)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rohit sapra 28 October 2008

This poem is written with the usage of beautiful words and describes the poetic strength of a creative soul.

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Randy Hogan 22 October 2008

I could never say with words what that means to me. If i tried i would only have a tears in my eyes and frog in my throat. I give 10 to infinity! like ∞ the love you send goes around the world only to find it way back to you My dear friend Peace! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Kholekile Monakali 17 October 2008

ja you are right my friend peace is from God without him you will never be able to forgive someone........nice poem

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Sadiqullah Khan 15 October 2008

Quite mature composition, well measured with fine stanzaic pattern, ,10

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Emancipation Planz 14 October 2008

Sieze the moments... both of you... keep righting them one peace at a time.... shalom...

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Reshma Ramesh

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Bangalore, India
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