Pathos Poem by Amberlee Carter

Pathos

Rating: 2.8


faith opens the eastern door, every-morning
to a world still full of sleep,
shine reassures his hope-
here is another day for the cause of living.

i sit in my darkened corner-
marveling at youthful simplicity
from old hungry eyes,
provoking an eternal still in life-
with a patient smile.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradeep Dhavakumar 03 April 2005

'provoking an eternal still in life' is good.Thank you,

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David Gerardino 03 April 2005

had to read a few times, not bad........

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