David Darbyshire

Rookie (6/11/54 / Darwen England)

Paris - Poem by David Darbyshire

I know this Girl Doris
She lives in Paris
Doris asked me to come for a visit
So I got on a bus and did it,

Went to Paris
saw lovely Doris
And all the sites
plus the night lights

I was tired, and I went to the Hilton
that is in Paris, after I left Doris
Now in my room thinking about the day
' I did Paris', I suppose I can say......

Comments about Paris by David Darbyshire

  • Rookie - 39 Points Patricia Gale (6/29/2006 9:08:00 AM)

    A clever little play on words Dave! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Francesca Johnson (6/29/2006 8:14:00 AM)

    Maybe you did, maybe you didn't.......gave me a laugh though, clever little poem, Dave.

    Love, Fran the Fan xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dee Daffodil (6/29/2006 7:51:00 AM)

    Cute little poem Dave...Paris Hilton...very clever!
    Dee (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nalini Hebbar (6/29/2006 7:46:00 AM)

    you didnt do anything i wouldnt do, did you now, dave? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 29, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 12, 2010

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