Pareidolia Poem by Crimson Love

Pareidolia

Rating: 4.8


I hear your messages whispered upon a secret,
I see your hidden beauty among the clouds,
A mere figment of such insanity,
A somber fantasy a crimson mind believes to percieve,
I see every forbidden secret hanging from such lustious love,
Your lips my Salvation, my imaginary help.

Only if my mind did not decieve,
Perhaps I could imagine you real.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 12 November 2011

In this poem of you love for the who you miss can even felt by the readers by the way, you write with your rhymes - which in turn paints picture in minds. I hope like Kamala Das and Emily Dickinson, it is high time for the whole world to reckon your talent with aplomb. A gifted poetess with 100% talent! FANTABULOUS! 'Only if my mind did not decieve, Perhaps I could imagine you real.'

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Abdallah Gamal 11 November 2011

Wow awesome! It flows beautifully, and the rhyme is so fabulous made a melody tune whispering in an angelic voice. Great imaginary, all this made this poem won the trophy among other poems, keep up the good work, you made a record in this site being on the most popular poets on Poemhunter and that wasn't achieved by luck but your awesome work that inspired all the poets made you so. Hope a a great future for you in poetry and in your whole life. God bless you :)

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