Painted Flames Poem by Puloq Arafat

Painted Flames

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It was an oblivious mystery!
After diving into the waves-
A crocodile attacked me as a vampire!
Yes, crocodile as a vampire!
Sustaining on sandy strokes-
Only dust of sands made my foot gray!
When changed my mind and dived into waves-
I was lost into blue villains.
An impossibly terrifying hazard-
Knocked me with its horrible wings.
This crocodile dangerously spiked me.
I lost my hope.
I thought I would die.
It captured my dream, captured my life.
I challenged it even boasting no potency!
Suddenly the crocodile went away.
I didn't know why.... why?
I took a long breath.
I was floating alone in the blue wide...
I got back my life.
Life was whispering to embrace it tightly!
I was trying to go back to the shore.
Life is now breathing by its green petals!
Rounding up my mind to taste its colors!
Life will see a rainbow or....
A heavy shower from painted eyes!
Sudden flames...but hopeful to see the sunrise.

Wednesday, April 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: survival
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 05 March 2020

Suddenly the crocodile went away. Life is now breathing by its green petals! Rounding up my mind to taste its colors! Life will see a rainbow or.... A heavy shower from painted eyes! Sudden flames.- Wonderful imagination, The crocodile, the sea, waves, your breath, rainbow, flames and hope. just wonderful it is. tony

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Puloq Arafat

Puloq Arafat

Mymensingh, Bangladesh
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