'Pain' Poem by Miizz. Beautiiful

'Pain'

Rating: 2.7


This pain I feel I can no longer Stomach
its crying out for help but I won't let it leave
She's bottled up and can't get out,
she speaks as if she taking over me but she can't leave
This pain I feel she just can't get out cuz if she does,
she always over powers love.
She breaks it down into three different parts life, love and me
This pain that I feel is so strong she fights with my body all day long,
she tells me that pain is her pleasure, and to see me hurt,
is always a great please, bcuz now I know this pain is ME...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidyadhar Durgekar 15 May 2008

well written...........good poem

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Avery Watts 15 May 2008

i love your poem. it's sappy yet brave

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