Overpitched Naivete Poem by Dorothy Kardas, Psy.D. Th.D.

That's what I call philosophical... theological sophistication and genius in poetry! Thank you Doc! 10!

Substance... substance and more substance, and most captivating, fascinating and illuminating style! Love it all but especialy the lines 'daisy unenvious of rose... slavery mindless overlooking both daisy and rose'. Great title and absolutely excellent and powerful ending. God be with you! 10! ! ! Max

Well, by golly! This one is another brain tickler with a 'TELL ALL' ending. You're enticing me to read on! You make us Texan Christians very optimistic and proud! Great writin', great readin' & above all some great learnin'!

Yikes! another STRIKE! If you were a bowler this would be a 300 game score! The last line should haunt us all... { Am I unfailingly failing the test? }...whoa, loads to think about now. Thanks again for another brain bender!

From the very first line to the last...shockingly powerful poetry! Mood and tone very strong throughout...another emotionally charged piece. Thanks!

'Undiscerning of the footprints of Light from footfalls of night... Judas-like fright' - this says it all Dr.! Great lines... 'grotesque vegetations of egocentricity'... 'runaway winners! goody-goody sinners! ' Brilliant ending! ! ! Dr. you did it again! Enjoyed the powerful messages and bold style! 10! ! !

Indeed, the greatest danger is when we enthrone villains and uncrown heroes! Unfortunately, this pattern seems to be the state of affairs in our modern living, seeing evil as good and seeing good as evil! Frightening thing! Another great poetic work enriched with great phrases full of insight as 'Christocentric longevity, ' 'Foolishness empire... they admire, ' 'undiscerning of the footprints of Light from footfalls of night' etc. This is what great poetry is made of... enduring and helpful insights and unique and unrepeatable expression! 10!