Our Passion Poem by Vaughn Bekker

Our Passion

Rating: 5.0


We get on the bed without any clothes
Our bare bodies to each other we expose
As you lye here in front of me
Your naked body i love to see
Down your back and across your bum
Softly my fingers i would run
Softly as i caress your skin
That is as beautiful as you are within
Gently and slowly as we start to make love
It`s as amazing as heavens above
The passion inside that we do stoke
Is as wild as a fire in the forest that broke
No more precious moments i could find
Than when our two bodies lay entwined
Your skin like velvet soft to the touch
I never knew i could love you that much
Like wild horses running on the beach
Deeper into each other’s souls we reach
Our bodies speak a language few understand
A blessing that few have in this land
To each other we give pleasure to ever intimate place
As from our minds the world we seem to erase
With every move you make under me
I see the passion in your eyes wild and free
Our bodies together with every stroke
Telling a story as if they spoke
As lover entwined it draws to an end
As our bodies each other their messages send
Quietly we lay and take it all in
Soaking every moment deep to within
Arm over your side i hold your breast
Snuggled together we lay and rest
A deep breath you take and gently you sigh
Happy in the knowledge that together we lye
For as two lover who would expect
That their souls so deeply would interconnect
As our minds go to sleep and start to unravel
Our souls together across the universe travel
So in the morning when they return
Again inside the passion will burn

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matt Mooney 22 May 2010

Vaughn, I have read many of your poems and explored your town Empangeni on the net.This poem pleased me most of all. It has depth, beauty and love.The language of the poem is worthy of the subject and the imagery is rich from start to finish.From my own experience of the use of rhyme I have found that it can be a trap, taking from the true expression of feeling.This poem of yours stands out from the others for its natural flow. You dont need rhyme all the time and if you do use it try internal rhyme here and there. It's more subtle that way.10. Matt.

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Anonymous Butterfly 07 May 2010

I liked the lines: The passion inside that we do stoke, Is as wild as a fire in the forest that broke. And: Like wild horses running on the beach, Deeper into each other's we reach. And: Our bodies together with every stroke, Telling a story as if they spoke. Oh My God! That was so sensual! Its the first one that I read here on PoemHunter. I really enjoyed reading it and personally I wouldn't change a thing. Its perfect. Have a nice day. B.B.

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