Our Love Poem by Alaude Solus

Our Love

Rating: 4.8


What is this feeling?
This burning passion
This heart is yearning for your affection.

I want to know
And understand
This feeling that is so grand.

Like a bird;
Wings widely spread
Having the time of being freed

Although it hurts
I will stand still
‘Cause this is both our will.

Yearning for joy
And sweet harmony
On a place with only you and me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 05 August 2015

Beautiful depiction of bliss of love, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Yll L 01 May 2010

the sentiments are sliding then....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 March 2010

Although it hurts I will stand still ‘Cause this is both our will. Yearning for joy And sweet harmony On a place with only you and me.. y IT IS FROM BOTH THE SIDES SO NATURALLY IT IS FEELING ALWAYS FINE... LOVELY WRITE AND BEAUTIFUL....10 READ MINE.. ANYWHERE... I MISS... COME HOME

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Milica Franchi De Luri 15 March 2010

O, this one is my favourite. Truly poetic. Short, but it says it all, absolute gem. It is going on the list of my favourites......10 points

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