Our Dream Poem by robert snively

Our Dream



Our dreams are getting closer
Closer to the point we can see them gleaming over the horizon
Its glowing as to say this is where you belong
calling me whispering in my ear thoughts of love
As I sleep beside you its like an angel softly breathing on my neck
Your radiant glow displays true beauty upon me
Your elegant hands softly hold my body as to lift me free from evil
Your alluring hair flows down deeply upon my shoulder with the scent of sweetness
Your divine lips kiss the back of my neck sending tingles down my spine that know other person could ever give me
Your entrancing eyes glaze upon me as to say I could live in this moment forever
I can feel beauty and true love surrounding me trapping me in its grip
This grip cannot let go, this grip is to tight
When love surrounds you and you embrace it
It will always be there
My mind now owns the idea that few others see
Some others miss completely
And many others throw away
The darkness is starting to break
The light is beaming through
I open my eyes and all I see is you
Your beautiful eyes starring back at mine smiling because were thinking the same thing
Thinking that were truly in love and want to be together forever
Knowing that we want to have a future with each other
And seeing that it can and will all come true

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

it sounds like you really love her. and it came from the heart and that's good. you shouldn't hide anything when it comes to poetry. poetry should be your naked truth. a really put together poem. i think your girl would be pround. you have my best wishes. keep on writeing. a 9.5 +

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