Optimistic Yet Not Done Poem by Sumita Jetley

Optimistic Yet Not Done

Rating: 5.0

In a suburb quiet, under the morning's glow,
Ayaan lived where the slow winds blow.
A coder by day, a mindful soul by night,
With ancient wisdom, he sought the light.

'Can't operate from heart, ' he'd softly say,
As life's roles tangled in disarray.
A call for help, a project in hand,
In life's swift currents, where could he stand?

In the chaos of children's innocent play,
Among their laughter, he found his way.
Life, like code, demands calmness in art,
The peace he sought lay in his heart.

Each role he played, a thread so fine,
Woven into a tapestry by design.
In moments lived with heart and grace,
Ayaan found joy in every place.

At his desk, flanked by green and tome,
He penned his thoughts in the quiet of home.
'To harmonize, to truly be,
Embrace all with heart, let your soul see.'

Thus, life's demands never did part,
But Ayaan now lived with an open heart.
In suburb's peace or children's cheer,
His heart operated without fear.

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4) beautifully written, with lovely rhyme and rhythm. Enjoyed

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3) high b p which he suffered from, ever since he had his own Start-Up. In the current times, the young gen live to perform, they give everything to success and they dread to fail. They are not prepared for failures. They can't face it.

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2) the pressure to win everything and faster than one's peer is immense. Recently, one of my close relatives passed away a very young age of thirty three, affected by Aortic aneurysm. The cause is High blood pressure, which he suffered from since he

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Wow! This lovely poem deals with one of the most pertinent contemporary issue: peace of mind in the most demanding times… In the new era of IT careers, peer-comparison and competition overshadow friendship, collaboration and camaraderie. The pressure..(contd)

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