Mr. Agape

Gold Star - 18,872 Points (all it took was a thought / Right Now, Right Here)

Only Two Options, Fear Or ____, You Choose...? - Poem by Mr. Agape

Foundational blocks we only have two, count it.

One is dense mass, the other is Spirit.

Which platform do you prefer to operate from?

They have names, both are 4-letter words.

Have 4-letter words always scared you?

Let's start with the concrete,
a solid foundation, can't be beat?
Its name is odd, it may sound queer,
this big, heavy block is called

Build your house and life upon this,
you'll be safe and sound, but not much bliss.

If that is fine, please don't go further,
what's next will ruin all, your old life murder.

Block number 2

Life's Greatest Mystery?

Go ahead write your story and your plan,
Live like a God or just a man.

Topic(s) of this poem: fear

Comments about Only Two Options, Fear Or ____, You Choose...? by Mr. Agape

  • Gold Star - 11,700 Points Hazel Durham (4/8/2014 7:36:00 AM)

    A very thought provoking write, fear is the biggest obstacle we have to overcome it or it can eat us up and spit us out, life is to enjoy and embrace the good things in this world! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 2 Points Haytham Mansour (4/6/2014 5:33:00 PM)

    The symbolism in this poem is mind-boggling! I've reached a different end each time I read this poem. Respect! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,451 Points Neela Nath Das (4/6/2014 9:18:00 AM)

    Universe, I adore your write because, it tells the hackneyed tale with a touch different than others.I have to learn this art of writing.Kudos! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 28, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 17, 2014

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