' ' ' ' ' Only Our Laughter Poem by Dónall Dempsey

' ' ' ' ' Only Our Laughter

Rating: 2.8


You were a 5th
season

where only love
shone

& we intertwined
like a Celtic knot

making love
to Vivaldi's Four Seasons.

Outside
an enraged storm

demanded to be
let in

but was met by
only our laughter.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Onelia Avelar 04 April 2009

'Outside an enraged storm demanded to be let in but was met by only our laughter'...while reading your poems i often feel like that as if the reality remains somewhere outside still demanding to be let in, but is met only by laughter :) I'm fond of the cosy atmosphere of your poems.

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alice sunderland 02 April 2009

always beautifully put. love the wording - as always.

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Wojja Fink 01 April 2009

to the Four Seasons... must have felt like for ever..lol John

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Reshma Ramesh 31 March 2009

haha! ! from storm to laughter...............wellpenned

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Original Unknown Girl 31 March 2009

Aren't storms the most passionate and intense of weather? And you didn't let it in? ? Sounds like you were both causing a riot all of your own! Bravo D & J! ! HG: -) xx

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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