One Of The Million Stars Poem by Lenie Pama

One Of The Million Stars

Rating: 4.8


Gazing at the twinkling stars above
Fascinating creature making me fall in love
Its brilliance which delighted my sight
Lifts me up and brought me into the height

My heart faints fast, shouts with joy and wears sweet smiles
The earth dances for me, and a sweet melody it sings
The heaven rejoices with gladness
A tear of happiness trickles into my cheeks

Happy moment was distorted, in reality I was awakened
My arms toward the star I stretched, but it's far away that cannot be reached
The only star, the love of my life banished in the dark
Leaving me lonely, weeping, and crying in the dusk

My heart shredded, my dreams shattered
My soul withered, and my whole world was dead
One of the million stars whom I really admired
Gone away, and forever behind the clouds it concealed

Monday, February 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lenie Pama 12 April 2016

the poem tells about a symbolic love story which a lover failed at the end..

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Suburban Lovechild 10 February 2015

Very thought-provoking and great imagery. Even though that star is gone or hidden by the clouds, there are thousands more waiting to be admired. Please check out my poems, I'd appreciate it

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Suburban Lovechild 10 February 2015

Very thought-provoking and great imagery. Even though that star is gone or hidden by the clouds, there are thousands more waiting to be admired. Please check out my poems, I'd appreciate it

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Chinedu Dike 10 February 2015

A lovely poem, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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