On Bluetooth - A Unique Love Story Poem by M. Asim Nehal

On Bluetooth - A Unique Love Story

Rating: 5.0


He was searching himself
All day and all nights
None to love nor stay besides
A blind walk, all over the places
Silently cursing self and existence
Suddenly a gentle flying feather touched
Everything changed in seconds
He saw the first rainbow
Felt as if a bird released from the heart's cage
Flying around the globe
And his soul melted within the body
For the first time he realized how beautiful world is

He could hear everything without the blue tooth
Which he normally used to wear…..

Thursday, March 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gordon Walter 14 March 2019

Nice touching story, sometimes when you are dejected the God sent special angle to help you overcome your problems, though the man was talking to someone else the girl thought he was praising her. Liked the way you built it up as a poem.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 March 2019

The rainbow of Bluetooth love is well reflected with realized uniqueness and love is magnified. A brilliant poem is excellently penned....10

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Rajnish Manga 14 March 2019

The travesty of life may come before us in different shapes and forms. The narrative unfolds a world of countless possibilities and interpretations. Some painful, some pleasant. Thanks a lot, Asim ji.

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