On A Spring.............. Poem by Reshma Dream Is Never A Crime................

On A Spring..............



It felt like a dream
Colours everywhere
The beautiful scent
Never went unnoticed
Butterflies visiting every flower
Felt like flying petals
All was fresh
All was colourful
Yes, it was spring

Flowers all bloomed
Smiling at everything
“Look at us”
You felt them saying
“Submerged you’ll be
In our beauty”
Yes, it was spring

I could feel the breeze
She was kissing me on my cheeks
While the scent of flowers
Hastily got into my nose
Refreshing me
Making me feel good
Yes, it was spring

The plants whispered
Or maybe sang with rhythm
They went on
Happy they were
Yes, it was spring

The butterflies were all busy
Collecting nectar from each
Annoyed a bit
Coz they were not admired
As now everything was colourful
Still they looked a part
A part of this scenic beauty
Yes, it was spring

As sun shone brightly
He made everything glow
Each green leaf glittered
As the dew tried hard to stay on
I looked around
A marvelous display of colours
Spreading positive thoughts
Everything, everyone was happy
Yes, it was spring

I bent down and pluck a rose
I’ll save it for my love
But later when I looked for it
Nothing was found
No flowers, no butterflies
Only buildings everywhere
I was late still I realized
It was all a dream
A dream that can never be real…………

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradeep Dhavakumar 27 January 2008

Good poem Reshma.Repeating lines work well with Structured poems. Try to structure this one and avoid repeating words. And Since 'Yes, it was spring' repeats well, try to use it in the last stanza as well. Regards, Pradeep.D

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