Chōka form:
As I await you
Painting streaks of sun breaks as
Day shades into a
Dusk - Sure as shooting! Started
Slowly, shaped swiftly,
Moon beams turned goldenly in
The twilight saga - As I..….
Tanka Form:
As I await you
Came on the infinite dark
Canvas, oh silver
Lamps sparked, Golden lights gladdened
In the endless chains, as I….
Sedōka Form:
As I await you
Darkness cascades on the earth
Shadows frolic eagerly and
Teasing me so my
Longing for you grows fierce
Breathlessly, as I await …….
Interesting and greatly enjoyable. Loved that last form and it's beautiful wording.
it was a delightful read. written in 3 forms, lovely. keep writing. thanks for sharing this one.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
delightfully written. three forms nicely done.
Thank to Heather Burns madam for a delightful review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍