Obedient Till The End Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

Obedient Till The End

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J-ust be obedient till the end,
O-therwise the race is incomplete;
H-ours are running fast,
N-o time for surrender and retreat.

C-omply with the Lord's command,
L-et your soul bow and bend;
A-lways follow God's decree,
R-emain obedient till the
E-nd.

Topic: Birthday of poetJohn Clare (July 13)

Obedient Till The End
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 13 July 2020

A brilliant acrostic poem my friend! Beautifully composed..................10

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 July 2020

Just be obedient till the end, Otherwise the race is incomplete; .....I think yes; exactly written

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