Numb Poem by May N

Numb

Rating: 5.0


Your light faded in the distance
your left to not exist
my starry night turn black
the air is not so crisp

i'm sucked back in this numbness
been in limbo too many times
being punished for my actions
my feelings are left behind

i'm swallowed in the darkness
left to think these dreadful thoughts
swirling through a haze of nothing
actling like i had a shot

no idea of how to feel
from shock to deep sadness
i'll give this night alone for tears
then no more shall be shed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 13 March 2009

An emotional poem for emotionlessness. i'm swallowed in the darkness left to think these dreadful thoughts swirling through a haze of nothing actling like i had a shot no idea of how to feel from shock to deep sadness i'll give this night alone for tears then no more shall be shed These two stanzas are deep and sad......... deserves 10. Best Wishes Naseer

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May N

May N

Cagayan de Oro, Philippines
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