Nothing Deserves Poem by merna ibrahim

A fine poetic enumeration of opinion though i found the repeatition of phrase nothing deserve more redundant...fine ending for the theme....Thanks

you expressed your feelings in short lines..i liked the poem.keep it up.10++for you

yes Merna, very honest message in simple lines... i like it friend 10.. Ali

An honest piece, expressed very well...many will relate to this my friend..keep up the great work

Wow........ We have a bunch of nice advices here from little 'old' girl Merna.

We are all mortals, nothing deserves. We are all going to die.nothing deserves........yes we are all mortals and there is universal truth in it.. i likedd the idea....10 read mine noteasy..beauty.. entry

Dear Merna- each verse tells a whole STORY, each verse tells that this life is nothing, this life is just a long Journey... Nothing Deserves that's Right because everything comes and goes/ 10+++ Thanks For Sharing/

very wise.. few words but so intensive.. let your light be your guide..

I liked your poem merna, your ryhme and your way of writing.your poem is simple but it's really has a great meaning.10+++

you are eight, we cannot expect something from any human beings except God, merna.....merna.... you are really right.