Not Yet Finished......Please Do Comment&&Tell Mee Wat Yoo Think So Far....=] Poem by joanna aguilar

Not Yet Finished......Please Do Comment&&Tell Mee Wat Yoo Think So Far....=]

Rating: 4.5


iT FEELS AS iF iT WERE yESTERDAy WHEN WE WOULD WALk TOGETHER HAND iN HAND...

&&yOUR SWEET SOFT LiPS WOULD KiSS MiNE...i WOULD DO ANyTHiNG TO SPEND THOSE WARM SUMMER NiGHTS WiTH yOO AGAiN....

THE TiME WE SPENT WAS SO PRECiOUS&&iLL REMEMBER iT FOREVER MORE=]

THROUGH ALL THE PAiN&&HURT, i THiNK OF yOO STiLL,

EVEN THOUGH WE ARE NOT TOGETHER, i SOMETiMES WiSH WE WERE [=

i REMEMBER THE COLD NiGHTS i WOULD SPEND ALONE CRyiNG FOR A PERSON WHO i THOUGHT REALLy CARED, BUT THE TRUTH iS HE ONLy WANTED ONE THiNG....]=

HE WANTED SOMETHiNG THAT i WASN'T WiLLiNG TO LOSE.....ALTHOUGH HE TRiED HE ALWAyZ FAiLED

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blue Eyes 08 August 2008

i really love it.i think u should finish it diffrently.nicely done

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