No Tracks In The Great Void Poem by Charles Chaim Wax

No Tracks In The Great Void

Rating: 5.0


Larry Yeury waddled into the Teacher’s Center
unable to actually lift each foot from the floor
flopped into a chair
and launched into an immeasurable pumpernickel bagel.
Suddenly, “OUCH.”
“What’s up? ” I asked.
“A roach in the cream cheese, Bernstein,
crunched when I bit into it.”
Yeury unlocked his bagel
to get at the crushed creature
then flipped it into the garbage
then stared at sections of abdomen and antenna
studying intently this message of mortality
finally putting the halves together and munching on.
“There was a roach in the cream cheese, ” I noted.
Waited for a response, None.
Continued, “You just swallowed about 68 known diseases
plus a few probably not yet identified
death in each bite, my friend
spit it out, save yourself.”
Yeury stuffed a chunk into his mouth
mumbling, “I’m strong
a fortune teller told me this and other
important information regarding the future.”
An odd wink, then another bite, finally a smile
and at last a belch followed by a bigger smile.
“What did she tell you? ” I asked
always interested how life tumbled into death.
Yeury gently placed the bagel on his lap
suddenly serious, face literally transformed,
then: “In this life a hippo
but after
a butterfly
yellow
with six small blue circles
on each wing.”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
... ... 26 March 2006

simply a wonderful poem, again one of your best, with all the elements finely tuned. this for me feels about the right length for your teacher centre poems; i think you got everything into this poem that you have in poems of maybe twice the length that you've written before.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 21 March 2006

I want to thank you for 'destroying' my breakfast this morning...LOL! Something said to read Charles' poem AFTER I finished. UGH... a 'disgustingly' well written submission! Even though it has made me sick to my stomach. L

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