No, They Are Not Stars Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

No, They Are Not Stars

Rating: 5.0


No, they are not stars...
This, my dreams shine in the sky...

No, it not a rain...
They be tears ours of angels...

No, these not a grey hair...
It only begins a snowfall of snowdrops....

No, they are not stars...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 November 2008

It's quite complicated to determine your meaning here but it got somethin to do with lost love I reckon.An unfinished love.Great piece tsira.

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Alison Cassidy 17 November 2008

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder is it not. Your poem beautifully and succinctly expresses this truth. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 25 November 2008

thats life as a dream, beautifully written 10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 29 November 2008

Stars are dreams, I like your world it's good to dream.. Andrew 10

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Chitra - 30 November 2008

bright repetition glazed with the golden dreams

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Bert Bell 04 November 2010

Ah, Tsira, you write such lovely thoughts and ideas. Your poems are rich in images and warmth. Very nicely done.10

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Kevin Carney 23 October 2010

What a nice write, short but you say so much. It flows so easily.10+

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Kesav Easwaran 24 January 2010

life and the nostalgia it carries with it in the face of realities that awaits ahead...nice work Tsira...10

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 03 January 2010

Truly admirable...first you and then your poem :)

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 December 2009

beautifully you connect one to another...nice poem

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