No Point... Freedom Poem by Vian Sabri

No Point... Freedom



He returned my pen runs counter nomadic
Between words elegant
And unleashed
And poured in Black
The white papers
Underlining Notes
Before introductions
The titles
And the loss of Miracles
Conciseness and accuracy
Scattered words
Here and there
Kaossal my heart intermittent
Points lost
Control over the characters
On the cause and circumstances
And declared independence
He returned my pen wants nomadic
Between the capitals of Love
And decided to surrender to the heartbeat

Friday, October 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love educates
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
when some one falling love he don't think about the cause, it just happen with out why?
when some one write with thinking what the other say, he will write but with no passion.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2014

Between words written beautifully. Nice expression.

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