Monday, March 16, 2009

No Longer Comments

Rating: 3.4

The part of me
That was you
Is gone.
I can no longer
...
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Nomad Omnia
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sky dreams 06 December 2009

such simple words with a very deep meaning behind them.. great write nomad

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Original Unknown Girl 24 March 2009

Deep questioning poem, I like this, not a word wasted. The emotion is conveyed strongly. HG: -) xx

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Sandra Fowler 20 March 2009

You have a good command of emotion. I like your title. So many things are, no longer...excellent write. Kind regards, Sandra

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Gordon Wilkinson 18 March 2009

yes parting can cause so much pain - 10

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Martine Kolber 18 March 2009

Left alone by the other one, we all feel incomplete. In love, the 'us' is more important than the 'I', and when after the 'us', the 'I' is left alone, it will never be the same again. Beautiful poem, I love it! Take care, Martine

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