Next Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
Next
I have just finished this moment-
without knowing the next.
I have just finished this day -
without knowing the next.
Whatever is finished and over is-
within me
A few with a pleasantness
A few as a burden
A few gives me pain
would'nt leave me alone
would'nt let me see further
whatever is finished and over.
The next minute,
The next day and
The next me is not being introduced to me
Whatever is finished and over-is not
Willing to introduce the 'NEXT' to me.
A very clever poem. Nice work and thanks for sharing. Karin Ånderson
good ending lines...the theme of the write is well lighted on here...good piece...10
great write! I like the last two lines how you finnished it up. thanks for sharing
This says a lot about time as we experience it, not knowing from one moment to the next what will happen. The first two lines sum it all up.
life comes with tons of suprises and some are good and some aren't but that can be the best part of life never knowing what'll happen next. great poem this ones going to my fav's.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A very cleverly written poem, thanks for sharing, 10 Lynda xx