My Sweet Surrender..... Poem by Antonio Liao

My Sweet Surrender.....

Rating: 5.0


like falling tears blew by the wind, seeds come to
create perfume of smell in the wonderful and beautiful
flower the eyes can capture

like the radiant arrow that hit the target of illusion of
dream, and as time swing the motion of the wind, the
ground kiss no more than to leave forever

make me the best of what you wish and create
the smooth super highway of lasting twist of what is
pleasing in your sight

water my emptiness and let the birds and butterfly
touch my sweet honey taste for the bees; wish to come
anytime of the day

now the nest patiently waited to hatch the eggs and
the rain is coming out to pour its fog, come my sweet
surrender of ripen juice of pure love and be with me

oh! apple of the eye, you may go and gone, but
remember that where ever i live my life; you twin my
Destiny.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 06 October 2009

nce diction! fine poetic disclosure! 10+

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