Kelly Seale

Rookie (12-17-1958 / Norfolk, Va. USA)

'My Secret Place'


“My Secret Place”

A beautiful voice awakened me from my dream,
“Hey! Hey you! You’re the one in my dream! ”
I scream.
You look confused, bewildered, and maybe even frightened,
My words, taken you by surprise.
I give you my hand. An offering of friendship-
Please, I plead… I’m not one to be feared,
I’m not one to be forgotten, thrown away.
The need I have is not lost within your eyes,
And you sense the connection right away.
You take my hand and allow me to lead you into my dream…
My Secret Place.
Your eyes sparkle at the magic that awaits you.
And You laugh, as I pop the wine cork-
“You’re crazy, ” you say.
Me? I look bewildered, and ask why?
“Because, I dreamed of you… the other day,
and you told me you’d take me to your secret place…”
“Well, what do you think? ” I wave my hand before you, leading the way…
And you give me such a warm, inviting smile,
“It’s not a secret anymore, you dork! ”
I laugh, and give you my most bemusing smile-
“Ah, your right, it’s Our Secret now.”
Glasses raised and a silent toast shared
with a clink.
Beautiful girl, beautiful place-
Amazing wine, and we drink.

cKs.

Submitted: Friday, May 10, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 17, 2013

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Comments about this poem ('My Secret Place' by Kelly Seale )

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Unwritten Soul (5/16/2013 7:31:00 AM)

    Ahh...nice story played...hmmm let secret untold if not it never be secret anymore hahahahaa_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Besa Dede (5/11/2013 9:25:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem. I like the simplicity of the words, yet they make the poem more interesting. A good write.
    Regards,
    ~Besa (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,101 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/10/2013 7:55:00 PM)

    an offering of friendship, good write, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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