My Old Love Poem by Jason Young

My Old Love



This day is a bad day,
I hope and pray for a better day,
I hope to meet someone that will stay,
I need someone to give me hope for a better day,
Why must I drink, it just makes my breath stink,
Everything in my life is gone because of drinking,
Drinking was my love, but now I got a new love,
Today I put the bottle down and see who and what comes around,
Be true to your self and the blues will go away,
Some day I hope and pray,
Whiskey go away,
My old love ' Whiskey '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 10 April 2011

Only time will tell! IN THE PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS which I wrote about a year ago, I felt the same ways my dear but I moved on and survived thanks the Lord. Never give up on your ultimate dream! Keep it up you got great talent and warm heart you can make it! Love and Peace for always! 10+++ Well penned and poignant write!

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J'sN Young 10 April 2011

I wrote this one years ago when I was trying to quit drinking but never really have broke the habit yet

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