My Lost Love Poem by d4rk0y sugbuanon

My Lost Love

Rating: 5.0


Sitting here all alone
In this dark and cooled room
Wondering how you've been doing
while I'm here lying n bed and crying

This tears would run dry one day
Being in pain with all your memory
Thoughts of you keep on hunting me
Dont know what to do when ur not here with me

Wanting you so much
my body is missing your touch
Needing you back so badly
Being you out of my life makes me go crazy

If anybody could see my love
Please do tell him he is the only one i have
Hope he will be back soon
Coz my heart only beats with him alone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 13 July 2009

Wanting you so much my body is missing your touch Needing you back so badly Being you out of my life makes me go crazy very romantic way written poem... idea is good and heart feeling one.. liked it 10/10

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Marieta Maglas 12 July 2009

nice conceptual metaphor about pain: ''This tears would run dry one day Being in pain with all your memory'' nice written poem..10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 July 2009

Touchy.........lovely poem! ........10+

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Cebu City, Philippines
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