Tuesday, July 13, 2010

*******my Hiding Place Comments

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When I'm sad and no one's around,
My feet are drawn to you and I bow down.
You always calm my aching heart,
Whispering to me, you'll never part.
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Meggie Gultiano
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Marvin Brato 08 October 2013

Very inspirational sentiments, your poems quite profound and in depth!

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Roseann Shawiak 23 September 2013

You made me strong so I wouldn't break - I just recently realized this myself after all I've been through in the last 4 months - my faith brought me through - I bent but didn't break. This line touched me profoundly, thank you for sharing.

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Anie Vans 25 April 2011

'My sins to you, I will confess. ...you're my refuge and my hiding place.' Says it all for me. As always, so heartfelt. Thanks.

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Kesav Easwaran 30 August 2010

'When I was weak and turned to you, You picked me up, you saw me through'... That's how the good Faith gets its reward...good poem...10

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Ken E Hall 15 July 2010

He will stand by you what you say he knows its from your heart...like your poem++++10 regards

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James Lagoski 13 July 2010

Dear Meggie~ As we pray during our our stay and play the roles we have been chosen to portray You were always there Just Waiting for That Day... I really liked the way these words just seemed to roll out of me after reading this! That always tells me it was a good piece of writing- Best Wishes to You and Yours~ Peace~ James

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