My Heart's Melting Poem by Olga Ogradyuk

My Heart's Melting

Rating: 4.3


The sun like yolk
Spread over the horizon.
The evening shadows
Were touching fondly my skin.

I was trying to count
Minutes to sunrise
To escape from that madness,
Not to give in.

Do you feel how my heart's melting
With the flashes of your wish?
And the game is over.

Give me some wine
To get sober.
I've almost persuaded
My mind to sleep.

When the sun's up again
And the wine's over
On the wave of new feelings
I'll just start my trip.

Saturday, April 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 19 April 2014

very good writing, I like it, thanks. Please read my poems and comment.

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Saniya Galeyeva 01 April 2018

A wonderful poem! Deep and full of hope. I love it.

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Fabrizio Frosini 07 January 2015

thanks for sharing your nice lines, Olga. Have a bright 2015!

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F J Thomas 30 June 2014

Beautiful Olga :) I've used the same persuasion method to quiet my mind a few times. I'm afraid it is less affective on the heart though sad to say.

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Saadat Tahir 14 June 2014

When the sun's up again And the wine's over On the wave of new feelings I'll just start my trip. is it a translation..... very nice...liked

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Richard Phoenix 13 June 2014

This poem speaks to the soul that has undergone a tumultous life. very nicely written!

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